Good morning,
I wrote this song about 20 years ago and just put it to music this past weekend. I hope you like it and if there are things about it you would change, I'd like to hear about it. If you like it, feel free to share it. The song is called "I'm Feeling Free"

 

The is the second threadI have seen with you "talking" about a song but I have yet to see you post it.

 

Lighten up Francis.. It's right there. And for the OP.. Uh, I wouldn't quit your day job. JMO.

 

Sounds a bit like an unpolished Zevon/garage band.
Good job.

 

I wasn't wound up to "lighten up". It's not showing up for me. I'm just a songwriter as well and I was anticpating listening to it.

 

What makes you think I have a day job?


So is it the words, the tune itself, my voice, or just everything you don't like?
I can get a real band and a real singer to do it right. Just trying to figure out if there is even a viable seed to grow.


Thank you for responding.

 

Thank you.

 

Did you post the link in the body of your original post, for some reason I'm not seeing it?

 

I sent you the link in a PM. I tried posting the link but it just embedded the video into the post.

 

I listened to it, not bad at all.

Let me ask you a few questions.


How did you record the song, did you use a software like Garage Band, Cubase, etc. or did you use some type of stand alone? If you did use a program which interface, if any did you use?

Also did you use pre-recorded drum tracks, if not who played the instruments and were they recorded individually?